The World...Is Him..., by LostChild Subscribe to rss feed for LostChild

The world is harsh
The world is cruel
The world only wants to rule

He was my friend
The one I could trust 
I told him everything
The false and the true

Something went wrong
Maybe I sang the wrong song
Coz now he’s cruel
He’s harsh
He only wants to rule

He tells lies about me
He smears my name for all to see

I don’t know what I did
I don’t know what to do

His mouth is filled with sinful words
His actions speak ugly words
He has no heart
His heart has gone

Something is wrong with this song....
Posted: 2008-11-03 14:55:17 UTC

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2008-12-11 04:14:35 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
What touches me most about your poem is the last line of the poem. "something went wrong"... so much said in these words, and actually might work in the 'imaginative intro' for the reader of this poem. I know I am running on with maybe a little much comment, but sometimes a poem grabs me and other times it wont. This poem not only grabs me but it calls out for help.... a very touching poem! Keep writing poetry! :) Great !

2009-01-09 15:55:27Danny Wilson
Its not the World which is harsh or cruel.Its some of the people in it.Its good that you vent your feelings in poetry because it truly helps .Danny

2009-05-27 06:59:46dispersed_sky
i am really impressed by your work go on and let the words speak for you...