Friends&Strangers

By Sally Rose • March 30, 2005 04:21 UTC

Little Rose: do you know how i feel? do you know what i mean? Stranger: It's not that i don't care It's not that i'm cruel and mean Little rose: will you color me with lables? will you stare when i bleed? Stranger: I can't pretend to see what you see I can't be everything you need Little Rose: Can you make me laugh? Can you trim my weeds? Stranger: I will from time to time cause you to cry I will mistaken flowers for weeds Little Rose: Promise to be faithful and true? Friend: I Promise to try as any good friend should

Current vote: 7.5 / 5

To vote, you must be logged in.

To leave comments, you must be logged in.

April 2, 2005 18:25Gina

That is so unique and clever! I love it! I really like it! I have never seen anything quite like that before... very cool!

May 29, 2005 00:46wishing_on_stars

This is so good! I especially like how you made the "stranger" into a friend at the end.

July 19, 2008 01:46Nora Eason

Awesome poem, you are talented

February 28, 2009 02:32xXWhatxAxBeautifulxLieXx

i really like. expactly the ending the stranger became a friend. nicely done here.