Friends&Strangers, by Sally Rose Subscribe to rss feed for Sally Rose

Little Rose: do you know how i feel?
             do you know what i mean?
Stranger: It's not that i don't care
          It's not that i'm cruel and mean
Little rose: will you color me with lables?
             will you stare when i bleed?
Stranger: I can't pretend to see what you see
          I can't be everything you need
Little Rose: Can you make me laugh?
             Can you trim my weeds?
Stranger: I will from time to time cause you to cry
          I will mistaken flowers for weeds
Little Rose: Promise to be faithful and true?
Friend: I Promise to try as any good friend should
Posted: 2005-03-30 04:21:48 UTC

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2005-04-02 18:25:14Gina
That is so unique and clever! I love it! I really like it! I have never seen anything quite like that before... very cool!

2005-05-29 00:46:38wishing_on_stars
This is so good! I especially like how you made the "stranger" into a friend at the end.

2008-07-19 01:46:34Nora Eason
Awesome poem, you are talented

2009-02-28 02:32:06xXWhatxAxBeautifulxLieXx
i really like. expactly the ending the stranger became a friend. nicely done here.