Friends&Strangers, by Sally Rose
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Little Rose: do you know how i feel?
do you know what i mean?
Stranger: It's not that i don't care
It's not that i'm cruel and mean
Little rose: will you color me with lables?
will you stare when i bleed?
Stranger: I can't pretend to see what you see
I can't be everything you need
Little Rose: Can you make me laugh?
Can you trim my weeds?
Stranger: I will from time to time cause you to cry
I will mistaken flowers for weeds
Little Rose: Promise to be faithful and true?
Friend: I Promise to try as any good friend should |
Posted: 2005-03-30 04:21:48 UTC |
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2005-04-02 18:25:14 | Gina |
That is so unique and clever! I love it! I really like it! I have never seen anything quite like that before... very cool! |
2005-05-29 00:46:38 | wishing_on_stars |
This is so good! I especially like how you made the "stranger" into a friend at the end. |
2008-07-19 01:46:34 | Nora Eason |
Awesome poem, you are talented |
2009-02-28 02:32:06 | xXWhatxAxBeautifulxLieXx |
i really like. expactly the ending the stranger became a friend. nicely done here. |