torn by love, by shreya Subscribe to rss feed for shreya

i cant think of anything,as memories flood my mind
i have nothing to hold on to, just an emptiness inside
there's nothing to smile for without u by my side
i wonder if they're true, if love is really blind

all thats left of you is letters stained with tears
roses pressed in books n neverending fears

i wanna grow out of it, but i think i went too far
there's no turnin back cause ur love's torn me apart!!!
Posted: 2007-07-28 10:38:11 UTC

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2007-07-31 16:52:35Angel of Music
Hey great job! ~Angel of music

2007-11-05 23:28:11BitterSweet
Wow! Thats deep and beautifully written. That should be a song or something.

2008-06-21 07:12:08shreya
thanks...its very personal... n im glad u liked it

2009-01-15 16:27:53!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
absolutely beautiful thank you

2009-03-14 04:34:44Tyler Cedric Golden
awww very sadening but such a fantastically written poem...I havent heard from you in awhile but i have written many poems since then if you would like to check them out...Tyler