daddys lies

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By Katie_H

why me why did you do this to me we were such a happy family we had our ups and downs but we always came around why did u leave were we not good enugh to please you you told me everything would be alright you said you loved me that night then you left to see her again you said she was just an old friend an old buddy from when you were young ishould have caught on to your lying toung you were the best daddy in the world you said i was your little girl you said i'll give you the world but i should have known it was just a lie a phase in your life you came home in a drunkin daze almost in a heated rage you hit mommy and told her to pack her things you said you wanted your dimond ring she said calm down and sober up you dont wanna wake the baby up you said fuck that and left again she collapsed on the floor in a fit of tears crying out to god praying that it wasent real you came back in screaming for her to get up she tells you that you fucked up we were the best you would ever have then she looked at me and said it was time to find a new dad.

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May 8, 2007 17:26Teresa

Its amazing but you need to work on your format

May 14, 2007 00:33mytruth

Powerful. I am interested to see how it would turn out if you changed the format.