loose ends, by thesexygreenmnm
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all good things must come to an end
i just didnt think it would end this way
i always thought you'd love me
the way that i love you
why do things work out this way
what is it that ive done
the world is never right
and you are always wrong |
| Posted: 2005-01-06 01:37:05 UTC |
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| 2005-03-21 05:18:26 | Melissa |
| I feel very strongly about your poem and i understand what you are talking about there are many things that need to be explained but some times love has two different meanings |
| 2005-06-13 01:43:55 | Loreleen |
| i agree with melissa this is a great poem |
| 2005-11-28 12:55:17 | Jay |
| i understand exactly what your saying here. |
| 2007-01-02 18:06:41 | liberty moon |
| dude i get u i get u good. this train of thought led me to write beat as one. please read it and tell me wot u think. i like ur poem |
| 2007-11-15 13:00:48 | Beth aka Anonymous |
| i can understand where you're coming from...good poem. |