I Hate, by A Lonely Song
yet so many people can't bring themselves to do it.
I hate it how so many people can.
I hate it when people think I'm mute, deaf, and blind
just because I can't bring myself to speak.
I hate it when I use all my strength to say something,
but people only hear and never listen.
I hate it when clocks are loud
and they sound like ticking time bombs.
I hate it when people just expect me to believe
everything they say.
I hate feeling this way
and having no one that's willing to help me.
I hate it when people look at me like I'm insane
during an attack.
I hate it when people stand next to me,
but never talk to me.
I hate it when no one notices me
until I do something wrong.
I hate having to walk out of rooms
because I'm overwhelmed.
I hate it when sandwiches get warm from the heat outside.
I hate it when the corner of pages get bent.
I hate not being able to control how I feel.
I hate it when the door closes on my face.
I hate it when people stand behind me.
I hate having to eat to survive.
I hate crying for no reason.
I hate having anxiety.
I hate seeing myself.
I hate being insane.
I hate being wrong.
I hate being hurt.
I hate being me.
|2007-03-09 13:03:42||liberty moon|
|wow, i am speechless. this poem is so intense and let me tell u, i hear u loud and clear|
|I gave you a 9 for this poem for you deserved it. The imagery was very intense and emotional. I just wanted to reach out a friendly hand to you while reading it. I have 3 more of your poems to read yet but so far this is the one I would pick as #1. Number one becaue it touches my heart. You have captured alot of my very own feelings at times in my life. I have to look up though aand go on through all of these feeling for if I dwell on the hate just one moment too long I could become hate itself. I find peace in knowing that the very opposite is alos true, Love for instance a complete opposite If dwelt upon can also transform a person into Love.Great Job! and thank you for visiting and comenting on my poems. God Bless You. Glo|
|WOW...Hectic poem.But really Good|