Hurts., by Rose1788
Its hard to see you and not feel anything,
to try and be unhuman and numb.
I have always felt something for you,
and that something used to be love.
But now you seem to not feel the same way,
and i ask myself, what does she have i dont,
the answer would be:
I loved you more.
I loved you longer.
We grew up together.
I went from a gauky young child, to a mature young woman.
You were there.
All those long summer days, and those crazy winter nights.
I would wait forever for you,
But im not gonna wait for someone you does this.
I have feelings to,
I have one life to live.
And its not gonna be spent, wating for you to make up your
and when you come to relize how i felt,
its to late.
[this is about my soldier. he crushed me when he left for
war, and when he found HER.]
|Posted: 2007-01-30 18:01:52 UTC|
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|2007-02-07 02:34:44|| ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
|well, I have always heard that War is Hell, in this instance I would say yeah they are right, but again, If there was someone else before the War... hmm? Yeah War is still Hell! Good Poem! very expressive and final! good job!
|2007-03-03 03:41:35||liberty moon
|its really expressive. i like it a lot