suicide pt. 16, by little_irish_rose Subscribe to rss feed for little_irish_rose

condemned to constant pains,
memories controls her mind.
to this place her heart,
her soul and body are bind.
to this hateful place,
where the worst of it occured.
year after year she comes here,
to pain her heart is lurred.
this ground with all it's hollowness,
matching to her soul. 
forgotten, and uncared for,
they both lay not quite whole. 
to her the land is snactuary,
to the land, she is it's saint.
so here she takes her last stand,
perhaps it is just fate.
two souls dwelling in darkness,
two bodies lie deceased.
the land that was cared for less,
and the girl that was cared for least. 
perhaps it is just fate,
that brought them together at last.
nothingness lies in their future,
darkness lies their past.
Posted: 2006-12-09 04:48:08 UTC

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2006-12-10 01:27:22User
I just can't explain how amazing this one is..!! I think I would say this is among the best of the series..your poems are so relatable..awesome..!!