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By littledrgaon •

Time Time is not a great healer, trust me.... I have waited and waited and waited stood up, whilst time slipped by noticed. like a blind date i waited perhaps time saw me and didnt like the look of me so skulked off... into space... and history i still feel the wound the wound time should have healed I have been on the waiting list for too long now whilst time hides behind me

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April 22, 2005 06:00Kellz

i like the diction you used with the lbind date analogy

May 29, 2005 00:27wishing_on_stars

I relate soo much. Wise, truthful words my friend

June 30, 2005 03:52bLoOdY_tEaRs

The deepness sheds light i can really relate to the feelings in this poem

December 2, 2005 18:45 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

I can relate to this poem very well!good poem!

December 7, 2005 18:22Crimson_Tide915

I like it very well thought out... great piece keep up the good work

December 29, 2005 21:19Dimplegirl

Very Good Point.. I like

January 29, 2006 17:57stolen soul

It was nice I really liked it and im telling the truth.
From Trav

January 29, 2006 17:59Love Dragon

I really liked it.
Time may be slow about healing your wounds but it will when the right time comes.
Ashley

October 29, 2006 16:02*~Kaylee Trissa~*

i like this poem. it sounds like you express your self thrue your poems. come check out my poems please! i really need some votes!

March 13, 2010 13:01Broken_angel[

Great!