time, by littledrgaon
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Time
Time is not a great healer,
trust me....
I have waited
and waited
and waited
stood up,
whilst time slipped by
noticed.
like a blind date i waited
perhaps time saw me
and didnt like the look of me
so skulked off...
into space... and history
i still feel the wound
the wound time should have healed
I have been on the waiting list for too long now
whilst time hides behind me
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Posted: 2005-01-05 12:38:36 UTC |
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2005-04-22 06:00:55 | Kellz |
i like the diction you used with the lbind date analogy |
2005-05-29 00:27:48 | wishing_on_stars |
I relate soo much. Wise, truthful words my friend |
2005-06-30 03:52:23 | bLoOdY_tEaRs |
The deepness sheds light i can really relate to the feelings in this poem |
2005-12-02 18:45:24 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
I can relate to this poem very well!good poem! |
2005-12-07 18:22:27 | Crimson_Tide915 |
I like it very well thought out... great piece keep up the good work |
2005-12-29 21:19:02 | Dimplegirl |
Very Good Point.. I like |
2006-01-29 17:57:24 | stolen soul |
It was nice I really liked it and im telling the truth.
From Trav |
2006-01-29 17:59:51 | Love Dragon |
I really liked it.
Time may be slow about healing your wounds but it will when the right time comes.
Ashley |
2006-10-29 16:02:40 | *~Kaylee Trissa~* |
i like this poem. it sounds like you express your self thrue your poems. come check out my poems please! i really need some votes! |