No One Knows, by A Lonely Song Subscribe to rss feed for A Lonely Song
Posted: 2006-08-16 23:30:15 UTC
I AM TERRIBLY SORRY FOR THE CRAPPINESS OF THIS. I WAS VERY SLEEP DEPRIVED WHEN I WROTE THIS. I JUST FIGURED I'D POST IT FOR THE HECK OF IT. xoxo courtney

You and me
I wish it could be that perfect
Can't you see
How each time I crumble when you don't notice me
In a world where love is thought of as simple
You smile fully with that tiny dimple
You have my heart.
Will you take it?
You have my heart.
With one move you can break it.

No one knows
The way you make me feel
No one knows

And I can't find a way
To tell you
And I can't find a way
To show you
Each and every day
I can only admire you from a far
I can only admire you when we're apart

I distance
Myself from you
I listen
To other people's truths
About how you are and how you feel
My resistance could never be more real
You make me complete
Can't you feel it?
You make me complete
Can't you see it?

No one knows
The way you make me feel
No one knows

And I can't find a way
To tell you
And I can't find a way
To show you
Each and every day
I can only admire you from a far
I can only admire you when we're apart

And maybe I should just give up and give in
When no matter how hard I try I will never win
Oh Lord, my love is strong
Oh Lord, will it take long?

To find a way
To tell him
And to find a way
To show him
Each and every day
I can only admire him from a far
I can only admire him when we're apart


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2006-06-26 04:57:49User
Hey..really amazing that you can write something like this in that state of mind..

2006-07-08 18:52:36A Lonely Song
Wow. Thank you so much. Geez, I'm really bad at this compliment thing. I'm not used to it. Haha.

2006-07-22 22:15:42Crimson.Wings
I think this would make a good song. I don't know how the tune or melody or whatever would be, but it'd probably make a good song. :)

2006-07-23 18:52:00A Lonely Song
Yeah, I wrote it as a song. I have poems and songs here. Sorry, if I didn't make that clear. Thanks so much for the comment! I means a lot to me.

2006-07-28 08:58:52
I'm serioudly sleep deprived now, so to a seriously deprived person, it's very good! Anna Nalick is awesome btw

2006-09-09 16:47:35 *****Junior Walker*****
Great poem,my favourite I've read so far

2007-09-25 18:32:23~Stay_Beautiful~20104
Even before reading the other comments, I agree, this would be a really good song! I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this! And hey, no shame, I get some of my best ideas for poems when I'm sleep deproved too! :) Great Poems!

2007-11-26 11:32:43blackmagicwoman
i really like this poem.i'm gonna try to write one when i'm sleep deprived and see if i can do half a good job!

2007-11-26 11:33:46blackmagicwoman
i really like this poem.i'm gonna try to write one when i'm sleep deprived and see if i can do half a good job!

2007-12-24 01:46:04Awakening Me
Even sleep deprived, you are still amazing!

2014-02-09 21:13:39pat
Yooo definitely great lyrics Courtney. I can almost hear it being sung with piano or something. Idk. Great job! If you like goofy rhymes be sure to stop by!