I LOVE YOU

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By Melissa •

I fall in to a dream so deep I know his love sweeps me off my feet so I fall down ten flights of stairs and knowing he is there I am not scared I know he will catch me if I fall fall in real life I will not be falling at all I know he loves me and I know he wants me I want him to keep me in his arms where I feel nice and warm I can't wait to see where this dream ends and can't wait to love him again and again .....Nathaniel, I love you!!

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October 10, 2006 23:12den

yes, love is like a dream. It is when you wake up to see if the other person is really there or not.

December 31, 2006 19:15sk8t3R gal 4 eva

your poem is okay dude.

March 24, 2010 23:53baya

okkay . . . i suggest to put some real feeling . . . it's all too cheesy and . . . fake . . . do you really love him or are you just trying to rhyme? not good

March 24, 2010 23:53baya

okkay . . . i suggest to put some real feeling . . . it's all too cheesy and . . . fake . . . do you really love him or are you just trying to rhyme? not good