on the boathouse, by GINA Subscribe to rss feed for GINA

I went to the boathouse for some peace and quiet, some time
alone.

It was so nice out at the boathouse on this cool like summer
evening.

The wind blew upon my face so gentle like.  I inhaled the
fresh air smelling the ocean which smelled so clean and
fresh.

I walked along the boathouse looking out at the evening sky
in such bright brilliant colors that spanned high above.

As I walked I took everything in as the colors in the sky
started to disappear and darkness started to set in. 

But, the moon suddenly appeared out of nowhere in the
darkened sky and it looked so big and glowed so bright,
lightening up the whole sky above. 

It felt so peaceful here, no busy streets, no working hard,
no one fussing or fighting just pleasantness here.  

But, it ended too soon when I realized I had to leave.  My
time alone here on the boathouse didn't last long enough I 
thought.

I glanced one more time at the big bright moon and walked
from the boathouse until another time alone on the
boathouse.

                                                            
June 15, 2004
                                                            
  Gina
Posted: 2006-04-08 20:04:59 UTC

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2007-12-06 23:27:40Simply-Me-20104
WOW!! This has such amazing detail! I can just visualize and completely connect to it!!

2009-01-20 22:41:33SMILING DARKNESS
I can feel this moment as I read. Your words so visual and clear I wish I was in that boathouse. Sometimes, having to leave to early is what keeps something interesting. I really like this poem so much

2009-03-18 09:28:53Metamorphoser
I felt like I was with you..nice

2009-04-27 02:28:14marsha
really good, I liked this