i wish u were my valentine

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By skergirl# •

I wish you were my Valentine Though I may not be yours, And I may, in my ignorance, Be speaking to closed doors. I have no inkling of your heart, No hint what you might say; But when I think of you the sun Will just not go away. There is in you a loveliness That makes my darkness shine, And so I'll wait, if wait I must, To be your Valentine.

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December 11, 2005 08:39thesexygreenmnm

open up, don't use rhymes - they restrict your thoughts. think deeper than surface discomfort. you have potential

June 28, 2006 03:29User

Yup...I used to think that poems must ryhme but then again the thought of wanting it to rhyme limits your ideas
and holds back whatever you are trying to express..in fact,I find it insincere
to have a poem rhyming meaninglessly..
I have written many poems that way and believe me I have deleted 95% of them as
I find it to be "insincere" and "untrue"
for I must only express what I imagine or felt not just writing..just a thought of mine...
don't take it extremely seriously ok..??

March 20, 2007 22:12Angel of Music

I love it! short, and to the point! great job!