Have You Ever? pt1

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By notsoinnocent •

have u ever felt like the person u luv most is just slipping away slowly and u wanna save them but u cant? its like u wanna pull them up but ur afraid that ur gonna let go so u let them fall anyway? like their walking away and u wanna stop them so u call their name but they cant hear u so they just keep walking not turning around just looking straight not saying good bye cuz they dont wanna hurt u? u feel like ur falling cuz ur hurt so badly cuz u know in ur heart that their not coming back. u watch as they walk further and further away. u start to cry. u want them to come back. u call them again but they dont look back. they just keep walking furter and further away. not turning around. not looking back. just walking into the darkness never to say good bye never to return. which brings me back to my question: have u ever felt like the person u luv most is slipping away slowly and u wanna save them but u cant?

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October 11, 2005 17:36Amby

I wish people would take the time to type in those few extra letters in simple words like "you" instead of using internet slang in poetry. I give you a 1. For using internet slang. It makes me not even want to read the poem. Dont use "u" and "luv", come on, take the time and punch in those few extra letters for cripes sake.