?lost?

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By Michele

?lost? Undescribable feelings of a deadend life, shes not sure where the finish line starts. She's lost in the world of her own facts and fictions, she's drowning in ankel deep truth. She's alone yet surrounded by love, but she sees only the narrow alleys. She knows what she wants, but tries too hard. Simply lost within a life that exists only in her mind. Feeling betrayed and forgotten she puts herself under all. Shes simply stuck in forever and lost in time, its undescribable feelings of a deadend life. For: Corey

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March 16, 2007 05:15Angel of Music

This is a really great poem! Great job!

November 14, 2010 08:24jennita

wow deep

November 17, 2010 11:03patty

i agree with the others, keep it up.

could you please read mine and give an opinion. i am new,

December 19, 2010 13:02*~*EMOTIONAL ME*~*

I like I like. Nice work

December 29, 2010 22:05eve

i liked it.it reminded it of me.great job!!

February 1, 2011 02:15Brenda G.Partridge-Brown

I can feel her pain, very deep!

March 17, 2011 04:35Sarah

i really like this. its really good

September 28, 2011 22:11Fore

Nice! I like it. :)