The Risk

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By HellFire •

Love in a fragile heart, Both a blessing and a curse. You wait inside everyone, and break loose like a river at any given moment. Love you've gifted me, and you've taken so much away. You are a blanket of warmth, and a dagger of painful rejection, Love with your intentions so diverse, You stand at my shoulder ready. Ready to engulf me in peace, Or drown me in torment. You are a risky game, At which not many people truly succeed. so love I ask you just one question, May I have this dance?

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June 27, 2005 01:44Cutebunnywithfangz

This poem is true about love. It is the biggest risk to take in the world. I will love to hear more by you.

June 27, 2005 01:54HellFire

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June 27, 2005 19:17Crimson.Wings

This is a sweet poem and I like it. Good job! :)

June 30, 2005 20:39wishing_on_stars

That's so beautiful!

July 7, 2005 03:11 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

so much like a country song, much more like truth! this poem is fantsatique!simply great!

July 8, 2005 05:55Lost~N~lonely

Great Imagery, i love the dagger part it remindes me of shakesphere days. Great write!

July 10, 2005 23:19Heart of Poetry

It is really good I give you a 8