The Risk, by HellFire
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Love in a fragile heart,
Both a blessing and a curse.
You wait inside everyone,
and break loose like a river at any given moment.
Love you've gifted me,
and you've taken so much away.
You are a blanket of warmth,
and a dagger of painful rejection,
Love with your intentions so diverse,
You stand at my shoulder ready.
Ready to engulf me in peace,
Or drown me in torment.
You are a risky game,
At which not many people truly succeed.
so love I ask you just one question,
May I have this dance? |
| Posted: 2005-06-27 01:18:27 UTC |
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| 2005-06-27 01:44:38 | Cutebunnywithfangz |
| This poem is true about love. It is the biggest risk to take in the world. I will love to hear more by you. |
| 2005-06-27 01:54:29 | HellFire |
| Hey it's the author posting! If anyone would like to contact me concerning my poem, here is my email address. [email protected] |
| 2005-06-27 19:17:55 | Crimson.Wings |
| This is a sweet poem and I like it. Good job! :) |
| 2005-07-07 03:11:59 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| so much like a country song, much more like truth! this poem is fantsatique!simply great! |
| 2005-07-08 05:55:28 | Lost~N~lonely |
| Great Imagery, i love the dagger part it remindes me of shakesphere days. Great write! |