A Little Bit Deeper, by J. K. Maxwell
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Your voice;
A little bit deeper
This time.
Your words hit
A little bit deeper
This time.
They stab
A little bit deeper
This time.
Into my heart,
A little bit deeper
This time.
My thoughts are
A little bit deeper
This time.
My hurt set
A little bit deeper
This time.
I sink
A little bit deeper
This time.
I cut
A little bit deeper
This time.
Puddles of blood;
A little bit deeper
This time.
I sleep
A little bit deeper
This time.
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Posted: 2005-06-08 19:12:48 UTC |
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2005-07-20 20:15:41 | abs |
i like it im not quite sure why not my usual thing but something about it is really catchy. |
2007-01-06 17:01:33 | BananaIceCream |
brilliant, simple and i liked the ending |
2007-05-15 23:18:53 | Angel of Music |
Great job! I really liked this one too! |