my love for my girl, by kimo.b Subscribe to rss feed for kimo.b 

without you haven isn't so peaceful.
with you hell isn't so violent.
when I'm with you i see the world pass by.
it makes me want to cry all because i never want this
feeling to die.
Posted: 2011-04-27 06:20:30 UTC
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2016-06-08 16:55:17Night
Good message but you might want to clean up the spelling errors and put some space between your lines. Make sure it flows. Good luck :)