my love for my girl
By kimo.b •
without you haven isn't so peaceful.
with you hell isn't so violent.
when I'm with you i see the world pass by.
it makes me want to cry all because i never want this feeling to die.
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June 8, 2016 16:55Night
Good message but you might want to clean up the spelling errors and put some space between your lines. Make sure it flows. Good luck :)