Dear mummy, by PoetryReconised Subscribe to rss feed for PoetryReconised
Posted: 2005-05-14 04:04:26 UTC
Dear Mum,

My scars are nearly healed,
But memories are all still sealed,
My tears have almost gone away,
But your image will always stay,
My fears, I have overcome,
But it wasn’t that easy mum,
And this war I have fought,
I have won from friend and family support,
Know I know life isn’t always fair,
It can sometimes be hard to bare,
But these wounds are healing well,
After my life had a fell,
I can laugh and smile,
Sometimes only for a while,
I know longer sit down and cry,
Or watch the world go by,
I can stand up and fight,
Because I accept, that you’re out of sight,
So thanks mum, for making me strong,
I have been waiting so long,
Because now I am so strong,
Always ready to carry on,
And I find my way,
Through night and day,
What you did, I cant be proud,
But now I can scream out loud,
A teardrop now and then,
But then ready to carry on again,
The support is what made me who I am,
My friends help and my great fam,
Growing up was something you could not see,
But the rest of this journey is up to me,
So goodbye mum, I will always love you…


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2005-05-18 16:43:39Cpick
Wow, very touching. Sounds absolutely sincere and that's what people want to read, sincerity and what's in your heart. Very nice.

2005-05-23 12:01:16PoetryReconised
Thanks! Yeah this would be like my fav.

2005-06-20 08:15:53soul_sista
go marley!!!!!

2005-07-14 00:47:13My_pain_your_thrill
Loving this poem!! It is honest and deep. Very good piece of writing!! ~~Lianna xoxox

2005-08-10 14:34:07 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
Great poem!

2005-09-05 12:09:18so_close_but_yetso_far
nice poem.

2006-01-26 16:28:52egyptian_girl
i love it... it has a deep meaning and it really did affect me!

2006-03-07 12:36:04soul_sista
yayyy im one of those friends that helped!~ :> xoXXO kate

2006-08-22 08:25:50User
So sincere and touching..I wish I can say that to my mama too..