deep green eyes, by My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO Subscribe to rss feed for My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO

every day I sit next to you
knowing your there within touching distance
but  you don't know im there
you just think the space next to you is filled with another
person 
a million others in the world 
why take notice of this one
ill tell you why 
when  you speak i lose concentration
for the brief but never-ending seconds that i look into your
deep green  eyes
my heart stops beating 
why don't you notice
why don't you understand
why don't you realise
i love you ,man with the deep green eyes
 



   
 
Posted: 2010-07-15 21:12:52 UTC

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2010-07-15 21:17:56My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO
the man with the deep green eyes will most likely appear in alot of my poems maybe one day ill describe him more...

2010-07-19 02:17:07Azure Faye
This is really beautiful. It's...graceful somehow. I don't know how, but it is.

2010-07-19 09:45:31My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO
thank you

2011-06-17 04:58:17~Stay_Beautiful~20104
Very easy to relate to and very well articulated!!