Secret Love, by raining smiles Subscribe to rss feed for raining smiles

immature words spoken
eyes stare in aww
at what they see
covering all the surfaces
me and her
so why me now...
serious words written
thoughts and theories arise
feelings crushed
friendship deteriate
harsh words yelled
hands wailing
balled up fists
gritted teeth

lust

tears

lies..

Beautiful Secret Love
Posted: 2010-04-19 20:36:37 UTC

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2010-04-20 14:59:53Ashley Reneƫ *Raining Tears*
wow. this is really good mah dear. i love it. was this written about "him"?

2010-04-25 20:00:40Cloudywindows
wow I like this. You have a talent many don't.

2010-04-25 21:31:19raining smiles
thanks for the awesome comments. I appriciate it

2010-06-16 16:22:26zishan evans
Life can have its moments of pain, but we must recover.We must learn from it and move on.Your poem expresses that lingering sadness we can feel. Zishan