{Insert Title Here}, by ~The Familiar Side of Strange~
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in a mind
and of a heart
we will fall
then we part
time is short
love still grows
we are lost
but now we know
our greatest fears
in those lies
one gives up
the other dies
so its written
in Fate's book
into the future
is where you look
for love to last
and last it must
we need the fight
fight for the just--
cause to heal
no more pain
her tears are shed
they are his rain
she drowns in hate
he in her sorrow
wondering why
she'll wake tomrrow |
| Posted: 2010-03-26 02:16:40 UTC |
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| 2010-04-14 19:08:07 | StarStarlit |
| WOW!...i simply think tht this is an AMAZING poem-i cant even write like this LOL...it is really good, and really sadd...i can actually relate...it reminds me of a break up, and also a little bit of a depressed state, almost leaning towards suicide, like in the lest line "wondering why, she'll wake tomorrow"-tht guy must have been important to her...but the poem is amazing, anyone i bet can relate to a broken heart, but suicide is not the way...trust me...im happy to be alive:)...but either ways, i love it-ttylz xD xoxo |