lost soul , by angelbaby94 Subscribe to rss feed for angelbaby94 

 fear conqers our  minds 
fear is something we won't find
with a lost soul surrounding us
and shadows of fear
just know that were near
of clouds of dust
and hearts that won't trust
we must find a cure 
thats kind and pure
so a lost soul won't wonder
then they can hear the thunder
of sparks that shine
and a drink of wine 
these lost soul won't fear
and know that we are hear
Posted: 2009-11-26 20:54:06 UTC
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2009-11-24 22:54:23StarStarlit
nice poem-i luv it-just one question...what if they dont kno u r there???

2009-11-24 23:07:15StarStarlit
i do like ur poem tho-and u r a good poet lol :))

2009-11-24 23:27:59StarStarlit
what i meant by the question was, there ARE MANYYY lost souls out there...and u say, "i can help them, and i will be there for them" but what if u cant, and even if u could, what if they didnt kno u were there for em...what if their problems were at least a little overwhelming...and no one...NO ONE could handle em, not because they dont care, but they dont kno wat to say anymore-and i just wanna kno, how would u handle it-would u turn them away? try and help? or fool them, and say ur there for them, but trust me, these people r waaayyy ahead of u sometimes, and they kno wat people will think-and it takes a real saint, or therapist, to calm them down-i kno this may not be wat u mean-and i am going over board, and this does look more like an essay than a comment, but there, i extended the question a thousand times...now answer it...

2009-11-24 23:29:18StarStarlit
oh! and btw, i dont expect an answer...and if u do answer it, i will be surprised and memorize every word in the back of my mind-cuz THIS, i must never forget...

2009-11-24 23:30:08StarStarlit
and u kno, tht the last sentence i wrote in my last comment, i was being sarcastic right??? lol...

2009-11-28 22:09:30StarStarlit
srry 4 bein a bxtch b4-luv ya buddy :))