All Becuz Of U (rewrite), by StarStarlit Subscribe to rss feed for StarStarlit

  



         in                            my room,
      a sudden                     silence,i look 
   out my room, to              only see a brick wall
  ...i feel so alone,          and yet so  frightened,
 becoming quite paranoid,     about the day i will fall
 ...i see my friends, all     having fun while laughing,
 i sit and fake a smile, yet    inside i'm only dyin'...i
then walk home alone, look      at others and stare, cause
  while they all have someone's      hand to hold, i'm
    just here, sittin' and cryin'   ...i remember the
      day he cheated on me,the     day i lost my best 
        friend,the day i lost my   happiness, and 
          started to live in the   rain...but the
             real question is,    why am i even 
              ryming, it's only  just such a 
                 pain...the main thing
                   ...is that, after 
                     you left me...
                       so did my 
                         world
                          ...
Posted: 2010-05-25 21:04:34 UTC

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2009-12-08 00:39:17izzy
this looks really cool and you did a good job writing it as well!

2010-04-12 19:57:42~Angela~
AWESOME!!!howd u do that?ur so cool!!i luv how its the shape of a heart!!!tell ur friends about my poems!!!get them 2 comment!!thnx!!♥

2010-04-14 22:24:07~Angela~
i lllluuuuuuvvvvv iiiiiitttt!!!!ha ha!! LOL!!! Alt #3