Promises, by Moon Subscribe to rss feed for Moon

You can make them
You can keep them
You can break them
You can crush them

What am I talking about?
Promises of course

No one wants their promise dumped
Like the garbage in the dump
Everyone has promises made
To someone or themselves

A promise needs to be kept or else its useless
Now some people break them 
But we all do that one time at least
Posted: 2009-10-30 19:52:22 UTC

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2009-11-07 14:46:31Chuck Shorter
Good job! you have a very good set of values. Don't lose this good sense young lady. You must have great parents! Hey! by the way, my three children are all twice yo age, but you sure would give them a run for their money when it comes to good sense and values. Good on ya girl! I'd appreciate yo feedback on my new poem "The One For Me" Love Chuck Shorter

2009-11-23 03:33:20Moon
Lol I'll check them out tomorrow its late here