I’m losing, by Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears* Subscribe to rss feed for Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

I’m losing the best thing,
That has ever happened to me.
I’m losing the happiness in my life, 
because I’m not the girl I want to be

I’m losing my world,
And the person who has my heart,
I’m losing my friend,
My life is falling apart.

I’m losing everyone,
That has ever been there.
I’m losing the person
Who promised he really cared.

I’m losing my dream 
And everything that made me smile
I’m losing my regret
Because it was all worth while

I’m losing my true love 
And there’s nothing I can do
All these things I’m losing
Because I’m losing you…
Posted: 2009-04-20 14:03:56 UTC

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2009-04-20 17:37:14!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
THIS IS REALLY GOOD

2009-04-21 14:00:10Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
thank you

2009-04-22 11:47:45CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART
this is amazing...i kinda am losing someone i love too

2009-04-22 13:57:57Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
thank you

2009-04-28 22:25:46♥`HopeBringsSorrow`♥
this is a very good poem!!! it shows real emotion!! keep up the good work!!

2009-04-29 13:05:17Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
thank you

2009-05-01 20:00:09true_poet
Aww this is such a good poem! Keepp it up oh btw thanks for the comment on my poem :)

2009-05-04 14:27:27Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
your welome.. anytime

2009-05-19 21:42:03...
Aww, I love this, I can really relate to it and it's a great poem! Well done!! =)

2009-05-20 12:58:58Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
thank you.

2009-05-21 20:17:41Gemma.
thats amaing! and thats how i'm feeling right now...

2009-05-22 13:45:34Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
im sure every body feels that way, i feel like it all the time.

2010-10-15 01:06:38raining smiles
oh man