I Told You, by Invisible Poet Subscribe to rss feed for Invisible Poet

You asked me why we fought
late last night
i told you what i thought
i dont care if we fight

i told you i didnt care
if you ever woke up from your sleep
now its time to get up and your not there
and my promise do i keep

i dont care that your gone
i told you i hated you
you said this was done
you said i wouldn't know what to do

I told you, i wouldn't cry 
i told you, i wouldn't lie
You laughed and went to bed
never again to move your head.

every one asks how i feel 
i say, i couldn't be better
we made a deal
if you died id write you a letter

here you go
hope you cry when you read it to
but its time for you to go
and you know your son, will not mourn you
Posted: 2009-03-04 20:47:31 UTC

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2009-03-05 02:31:55*Psychopathic Child*
this very interesting poem I like the incite that you gave, so much passion I love great job. keep up the good work. P.S. i added to my freestyle poem made some modifications.

2009-03-05 15:06:42Ashley Reneƫ *Raining Tears*
this is really great! thank you for your comments they really mean alot to me...

2009-03-21 12:56:37CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART
this is very good, it has feelings behind it, not sad or depressed but relieved. I cant really say sorry for that but i say it anyway. thank you for your comments