Love's Puppet, by Shine-On Subscribe to rss feed for Shine-On

Deep within
We’re filled with strings
Tied to pieces 
And fragile things

Like guitars
They’re pulled and plucked
Till one breaks
And ends our luck

Replaceable 
Yet still sore
Will always hurt
Where it wore 

They run through body
With clinging feel
Grow within us
To where we heal

But if what heals
Is broken
How can we fix
What some have stolen
Posted: 2008-11-28 06:10:10 UTC

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2008-12-01 16:26:50ray!
I really love it. The puppet metaphor/theme was really revealing

2008-12-18 18:43:50!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
NICE JOB

2012-10-11 17:04:19nellyuu
Hello Dear... ([email protected]) is my email My name is Miss Nelly ,I wish i could get to know you for it is my pleasure to have you as my friend for a friend is all about Respect,Admiration and Passion also friendship consist sharing of ideas and showing true love without cheats,lies and betrayal and i have this feelings to share with you, i believe that you are the type of one that i want in my life for a serious relationship,i want you to know that age, race,and religion is not important to me all that is important to me is pure love,waiting to hear from you i will send you my picture please reach me at ([email protected]), sorry i could not upload my picture here, but i well send you some as soon as i read from you, Have a beautiful day thanks, ([email protected]) Miss Nelly.