Your Letter

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By Carolyn

This is my first poem I've entered on this site. I hope you like it. This poem is the first of two I've written so far. It's sequel is called My Letter. I appreciate any tasteful feedback.(These two poems are not about me.) Your Letter You got that letter sealed and stamped was your fate Mr. Brian Sullavin of Troop 6038 In your Red Sox shirt and hiking boots you handed me the paper from which I read: Drafting Notice and our lives burst to vapor. Your eyes denied mine as I begged for an explanation. "They need me," you said, "I did the registration." I couldn't breathe. Choking on the image of Brian. My Brian. With a M-16 in an empennage. I yelled, kissed him, was held and cried with his soft 'I love you's, he apoligized. "I'll still watch the sunrises with you when I'm away, the same sun that opens our new day." Now, with one last look from a shrinking school bus, I know it won't be the end of us. Don't worry, I'll tape your Family Guy but french fries and peanut butter will make me cry. You'll test your courage, prove yourself. I'll test my patience, alone on a shelf. You got that letter, and it tore my world apart but in each envelope I'll send you a piece of my heart.

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December 13, 2008 05:53~Stay_Beautiful~20104

Ok, still fighting back tears! haha Knowing that these aren't your own personal experiences show just how amazing your skills are!! To be able to put THAT much emotion behind it.. wow... It's truly beautiful! Kudos to you!