,.,.,.,.. If I Was ., ,.,.,.

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By -fruit-loop-

.,,.,.,,,.,. if i was a poet id write a line that would make you melt a verse ,.,. maybe just a line,.., you'd go jelly,.,. be all mine if i could sing id make you a tune sing you a song humm it to you as hand in hand .. we strolled along if i was a writer id create a you novel a tale of woes and hardships over comed..endless endeavours (##) but i have no rhymes i have no lyrics. i have no pen i have no inspiration .,.,,.to get up.., and start again.,., a million ideas a million sighs an abundance of gasps.. through uncountable cries.. if i was a man would i be here today id have fought harder for what i wanted Bin brave enough ,.,., to seize my Day (##) but not just hardship fluffy pillows and flowers.,,.,. hand in hand mindless days.,., just you.,.,for hours n hours.,,.n life escaping hours.,., but this life,.,., another lost whimp.. it callously,., devours.,., remorselessly taking.,.,back to the earth,.., a life force not needed.,., an expired worth. in a sound prooved room no one hears no one cares im tired now..,.,its time,.,.,. what would you say,.., if it was the last hting you ever did.,., something most memorable i'm sure,,.,. but i'll remeber this,.,.,.,., i had one dream .,., i wasnt greedy :) i wasnt greedy :( i wasnt .,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.i wanted little,.,. at the cost of all.,.,.,.

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August 15, 2007 00:43-fruit-loop-

Cest la Vie.,.,., as the Romans say.,.,

August 27, 2007 17:57Angel of Music

wow! this is beautiful! keep up the amazing work.

September 9, 2007 00:56-fruit-loop-

.,,.., Thanks Angel.,., didnt realise id submitted this.,., i was still working on it.,.,