Escaping the Pain, by A Lonely Song
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Getting drenched in the rain
Releasing my pain
Words fill my ear
Followed by a melody I can only hear
Constantly thinking
Constantly sinking
No one but you
Knows my problems through and through |
| Posted: 2007-03-07 23:24:32 UTC |
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| 2007-03-10 21:22:56 | *****Junior Walker***** |
| hey,nice to hear from you,im here trying to recapture my hunger for poetry,was thinking how to do it and ended up writing a poem about it in rough,it will probably end up on here as "sold my soul" not sure yet,nice poem,i think you can emphasise something well by doing it like you did,having the last line not rhyming and the rest rhyming,it emphasises the last line,nice work,keep pumping life into the site |
| 2007-04-10 00:45:05 | *****Junior Walker***** |
| hey thanx for the comment,ye i have a myspace www.myspace.com/jay_w_999 add me when you can,o and i didnt know you could join the site at 14 Courtney |