Who, What, Where, When, How, by Lindsay
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Whou would care
that could fix the tear?
What could they do
would they give up too?
Where would I go
If I felt so low?
When could I stop
if it was all a flop?
Why does it matter
It will continue to tatter?
How will I know
when I can go? |
| Posted: 2007-02-28 05:17:33 UTC |
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| 2007-03-15 02:51:12 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| alot of good questions here in your poem.I too wrote a poem with a similar title. Read it if you wish, but your poem is a good one! glo |