black water, by tink Subscribe to rss feed for tink

shattered pieces of an existence once beautiful
sink to the bottom of the ocean surrounding me
slipping from sight into the black depths
of the icy reality taking hold
nothing to hold on to
no one to lift me out
all on my own
strivng for an existence I once knew
Posted: 2005-03-03 11:23:44 UTC

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2005-03-04 23:17:10The Irish Child
this is Excellent

2005-03-10 12:53:48My_pain_your_thrill
this is a really nice poem, creative and deep, i like it