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Hello every one I like to write and I have written many poems but I use to write in punjabi and hindi language. Now I have started writing in english so I have created this account to take the feedback from all of you so dat I cn improve my writing skills. So I would love to see your feedbacks.. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you
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still deep inside 3
though times
yaad na sanu karin
jee karda
want to meet u
why I love him
beautiful place