See, hear, feel, by My_pain_your_thrill
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See these tears,
As I begin to cry,
Forever lost in,
The question why,
Hear me scream,
While you start to drone,
Say you'll be here,
But I am alone,
Feel me, feeling you,
Crying for a reason,
Being turned away,
Why do you all keep leaving?? |
| Posted: 2006-01-10 16:09:41 UTC |
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| 2006-01-09 22:11:58 | Kirsty (living in the light) |
| Dramatic poem that I can relate too in my way but not your way. I am in the second round of the poetry contest too. I aint preach to you but I will pray for you. Hope to hear from you soon. When you think no one cares about you remeber that someone is massive world does cause I do. |
| 2006-01-24 18:05:26 | Faith |
| Very well done! I feel this way a lot of the time... it's definitly not a happy place to be. |