I am not fucking invisible!!, by My_pain_your_thrill Subscribe to rss feed for My_pain_your_thrill

I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE
Why can you not see?
All the potential,
I have within me

I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE
Open up your eyes!
See me here below,
Where all my shame lies,

I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE
You can’t just ignore,
I have so much missing,
But I can gain so much more,

I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE
So how can you think I am?
You think I’m not worth it,
But I’m doing what I can!

I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE
But you think you’re way up high,
Better than her and me,
But you are NOTHING in our eyes!

WE ARE NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE!!

Posted: 2007-08-21 00:08:34 UTC

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2005-12-06 21:40:40Debz ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~
this is strong who are we aiming this message at?? xxxxxxxxxxxx

2005-12-06 22:06:31My_pain_your_thrill
college!!

2005-12-08 01:57:33Rilla
Nice message. Love the line "I have so much missing, but I can gain so much more" Could be a lot stronger if you allow more thoughts and longer lines. Great poem!

2005-12-13 02:05:57waterlily
my old lover is definitelee invisible..but visbill in other ways..that smart ass rascall!

2005-12-13 13:59:07My_pain_your_thrill
This isn't about a lover, it's about lecturers at college looking down on you..

2006-01-06 21:43:26 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
I can rellate to this poem for when I was in college my classes were held in rooms where the Prof was centered in the room below us,yet it felt like he was elevated and looking down.Thank God I finally got my eyes off his status and stature and back onto my studies! :D Good Poem!er.. exception of a few choice words.. (pun intended,if no harm done!) :D

2006-01-25 23:09:11love nothing >>--
im replying to what u said to my friend 'live_laugh_love'----Why dont you write your own poem about how u feel about God instead of bitching at her for her beleifs?! ACK!

2008-02-04 18:21:27Mollzyyx
WOW took my breath away i think it is soo amazingg. Read my poems and plleasee give me some tipss! x

2008-02-10 10:15:21Invisible Poet
hey think you could take a look at my poems i cant get them to show up on the list authors just check them out, nice poem strong words but nice nontheless

2008-03-15 03:18:57Firec
very blunt, but very good!

2008-06-02 02:41:05Nora Eason
this poem had too many curse words in it to be a good poem.

2008-09-20 13:31:19Marie Baigrie
i really like this 1 xxx

2008-12-23 14:47:48Packspoet2000
i like this poem.... It has alot of deep strong emotion... I thought it was about a lover untiul i read the comments... Still it is very strong and well written... And as for those people complaining about the swear words.... There is a swear word clearly visable in the title of the poem.... if you are offended by swear words why read a poem with one in the title :S anyway.... i love this.... Good job :)

2009-03-09 00:53:26SAMIRA JONES
I LIKE IT SO POWERFUL

2009-04-06 14:39:26Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
this is really good

2009-06-08 16:43:45Craney
Nicely developed poem.

2009-10-30 19:29:33*+*+barbed+*+*wire*+*+*
you are ausomn!