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A plain Simple rose
Languished in Placid time
That is all I need
With a slow sunrise to break 
From the peaceful eve
Eyes alight with Everlasting hope
You will be my love 
Cry for me when I forget 
Revolution of the Heart 
Behind these pale blue eyes 
A Deadly secret sleeps 
Waiting to destroy your world 
So I see to you 
All that I need
A place Languished in Placid time
Within this plain Simple rose 
Posted: 2005-12-02 01:51:17 UTC

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2005-12-02 03:52:06Faith
Interesting use of language...

2005-12-03 03:41:00Lovesick and Sick of It
beautiful poem

2006-01-01 05:34:12lost the lonely dead
i like the way the beginning of it matches up with the end for one thing and its a thought-provoking poem to be sure and well i just like it

2007-07-04 23:46:00-fruit-loop-
i dont get it,,.,. it's,..,.,,. rythmless

2008-10-03 02:38:50Josiah Hammond :)
very nice i would love o get feed back on some of my stuff if u would.