still as time, by poison girl Subscribe to rss feed for poison girl

We talk a talk that knows no boundries
We feel a feel that knows no words
Like a life stands subtle, silent, slow...still
A lifeless understanding to live a life inmortal
The beating of our hearts is our only concious disturbance
We walk a walk together that knows no perfect ground
The significant cure for our enduring desire,
to only hear ones breath
My childish behavior is only to hide the silent truth
My secret for you and desire for you and my dreams of you
Lie untuched in my bleeding head, pleaing for our next
meeting
But that was when our time was still.

Posted: 2005-11-26 18:58:39 UTC

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2005-11-27 05:28:59thndrhwk
That's pretty good; it has a very vivid feel to it, and is very relatable. Nice work.

2005-11-27 12:25:57Don't build lies on ice cubes.
ahh I can relate to that, particularly the first line. Great poem, I love the repetitive style

2005-11-27 20:51:21Crimson.Wings
i can relate to this too. good poem.

2005-11-30 03:31:36little_irish_rose
i really enjoyed reading this poem..... it wuz very well written.... good job....

2005-12-01 20:20:44Amy Mc
I relate