i wish u were my valentine, by skergirl# Subscribe to rss feed for skergirl# 

I wish you were my Valentine
Though I may not be yours,
And I may, in my ignorance,
Be speaking to closed doors. 
I have no inkling of your heart,
No hint what you might say;
But when I think of you the sun
Will just not go away.

There is in you a loveliness
That makes my darkness shine,
And so I'll wait, if wait I must,
To be your Valentine.
Posted: 2005-02-01 00:57:54 UTC
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2005-12-11 08:39:52thesexygreenmnm
open up, don't use rhymes - they restrict your thoughts. think deeper than surface discomfort. you have potential

2006-06-28 03:29:11User
Yup...I used to think that poems must ryhme but then again the thought of wanting it to rhyme limits your ideas and holds back whatever you are trying to express..in fact,I find it insincere to have a poem rhyming meaninglessly.. I have written many poems that way and believe me I have deleted 95% of them as I find it to be "insincere" and "untrue" for I must only express what I imagine or felt not just writing..just a thought of mine... don't take it extremely seriously ok..??

2007-03-20 22:12:02Angel of Music
I love it! short, and to the point! great job!