I live over your death, by hidden Subscribe to rss feed for hidden

your gone
I'm alive

I dream of you
of your pain

the subtle crack
of your elbow breaking

the pleading scream 
of my fist in your face

the muffled scream
of my crushing embrace

the slow drip
as my knife slits your wrists

the crunch
of my baseball bat and your chest

the scent of burning flesh
of the fire in your hair

a million and one tortures
I have envisaged for you

I can only relish the idea
of any of them coming true

all i wanted to say was that i miss you
Posted: 2005-10-07 21:28:50 UTC

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2005-09-25 21:38:30waterlily
i wish i could kill my old siclian lover a thousand times in a row...even if it is in poetry you know...

2005-10-05 01:10:39ill haven
you're gone fire in* your hair nice word usage!

2005-10-07 21:19:12hidden
damnit! ok I need to look over my poems before i post them. thanks again

2005-10-10 14:24:49Lora
once again luv the last line it totally alternates the rest of the message xx

2007-01-06 05:51:54sk8t3R gal 4 eva
that was an awsome poem. i have commented on almost all of your poem and they rock!!! well i like the last line the best.