Destiny's End (9), by ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ Subscribe to rss feed for <font color= ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ ">



One  path a future ,one path a goal, 
one heart a chalice ,which seems to guide the whole.
rules learned and wished for,
the knowledge  to survive 
and  not realizing  destiny's on the rise.

Words spoke of destiny and always in the plus,
never realizing ,but making  too much fuss.
wishes for  tomorrow which light a different day,
hoping that the call of love will gladly come their way,
ultimately love will surley find it's place.

Then all too soon it happened,the words a final fate,
this love that was  profoundly true,has opened another
gate.
this forever that was spoken of ,didn't even wait.
who brings these calls  upon my life without a guest
invite,
is it simply destiny, or lover's having a fight?

I know there is an end today as I have never known,
for within this bleeding heart of mine ,there is 
no one left at home.

© Copyright gloria/glostarg

6-18-2005




Posted: 2009-11-10 19:26:14 UTC

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2005-08-05 18:15:07AHopelessMemory
i love this!! i deffently feel i relate to this

2005-10-14 17:26:39.xx:+.Disposable.Darling.+:xx.
i like the way you write, i've read a couple of your poems now but i have to say this is my favourite. beautiful :).

2005-12-05 18:02:56 Kirsty (living in the light)
ive adde you to my favourites so i can just come back to your poetry as it is so awesome

2005-12-06 07:26:10Spiritual Beauty
I really love this poem, i think it will be sth that will make my day for a long time.

2007-01-20 03:01:20sk8t3R gal 4 eva
this is sooo good! it gives me alot of hope in many things. it touched me. i love it!

2008-01-05 04:46:28Sheila
You are really talented

2008-01-10 03:31:52Sheila
Gloria, how long you been writing and where did you get your copyright? Message me back.Here or the other website.

2008-02-15 07:30:39Invisible Poet
its really hard to get feedback on this sight if you dont have a bagillion poems

2009-11-07 07:38:35Chuck Shorter
Hey Glo, I'm back after a looooooong break. Been tied down with some unavoidable hassles. By the grace of God things look better now. Jus read this old poem of yours. The rhyme and meter are great, however greater still is depth of your feeling and profound understanding of the claustrophobia of loneliness, especially when it comes to changing one's own destiny. Yo' the best Glo! don't evah stop writin'. As always, with much Love, Chuck