Can't You See?, by InLoveWithLoverBoy
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Can't you see
What you're doing to me
Don't you see
What I see
Do you feel
What I feel
Can't you see? |
| Posted: 2005-06-17 02:06:58 UTC |
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| 2005-06-28 06:52:11 | Lillian |
| A simple poem with a strong personal message that most of us try to send at some time during out lives. Lovely work. |
| 2007-03-15 01:07:42 | Shattered Mirror |
| short but sweet its strong! you can convey your meaning very well! |