TOGETHER FOREVER , by Natural_beauty_Ashe Subscribe to rss feed for Natural_beauty_Ashe

we were still young but our love was too great
for us to be separated over any stupid mistake
so to avoid all of this something had to be done
so i put two bullets into my fathers gun

first i shot you before you had time to awake
then i shot myself because it was a sacrifice i had to make
i knew that if we were this way everything we would be
better
i knew that after all of this we could be together forever
Posted: 2011-07-04 04:57:41 UTC

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2011-12-22 01:05:57lance
sacrafice and ending,,,,,,2 main ingredients for a good poem

2012-02-05 02:03:47Natural_beauty_Ashe
true....thanks and feel free to tell me where i need improvement :)