The Final Good-bye, by eleanor maslen Subscribe to rss feed for eleanor maslen

That moment when you kissed me, as soon as your lips touched
mine I fell in love with you. I never wanted our lips to
part. I wanted to stay in the moment until the world
crumbleded, and there was nothing left. just us locked in a
dream world one that we were sharing. just us, no one else
to taint or destroy it. No part of it was anyone esles. two
people trapped in an intermet embrace. that sparkeled and
glowed in posibilities. You pulled away and it was
shattered, like ice dropped from a great height. My hopes
and dreams fell in front of me as i watched you walk awayand
i knew that i would never lay eyes on you again.
Posted: 2011-06-20 14:27:29 UTC

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2011-07-05 02:34:12Daisy
How sad but beautiful. The moment unforgetable. The memory will never die now that it it on the net.

2011-08-07 08:04:10Natural_beauty_Ashe
I really love this and I can relate because I know this feeling

2011-08-10 16:25:23Cortney shea.
I can relate to this poem. Its short and powerful. Very well written.