Alternate Ending, by Loneliness is condescending Subscribe to rss feed for Loneliness is condescending

You come storming in and then all is quite 
Their blood falls silently to the ground 
Covering the ground and slowly eats away the souls of men

And the silent screams of the dead shall echo over the    
Filed for the rest of eternity crying out for forgiveness 

Unable to deal with the emptiness 
Forgotten by all pushed in to the past 
Struggling to be heard but there's no one left to listen 

This Silence speaks for everyone 
Posted: 2006-04-16 18:42:36 UTC

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2006-03-03 15:12:19lost the lonely dead
one of your best i really love it, the begining seems a little off to me at frist but its good, i like the line "and the silent screams of the dead shall echo over the filed for the rest of eternity crying out for forgiveness" and then "this silence speaks for everyone"