Let My Burden Be, by izzy Subscribe to rss feed for izzy

i stand corrected alone
again i walk this path back home
is that really your life
you're twisting the knife 
in my side
is that pride
or are you being naive
just leave

and come back 
in a month or two 
and tell me how you 
were wrong when you said we're through

my liberty cracks 
under the pressure of proven facts
these lies come in stacks
im lost cannot back track
to an earlier date
you see a man that you hate
and you mention his name politely
why does it remind you of me
you were more than touching
beat my soul like some percussion
instrument give me a small concussion
and i say "hey whats with all the rushing"

you were like my burden
kept my sanity a burning
and you mention how you love me
i say oh just let my burden be

Posted: 2009-12-01 00:49:43 UTC

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2009-11-28 17:13:30ma_chapa3xD
............... 0_0 ................ that is AWESOME! i love your style you must have a lot of experience with your feelings. haha ;) great izzy.

2009-12-06 05:38:55~♥miss crazy♥~
like it and i like your style

2009-12-11 01:40:12Emma_Bee
wow... i find it hard 2 ryme... but u make it seem easy

2010-02-07 00:24:11Disruptive Silence
this is really, really good! very touching

2010-10-28 22:07:19Sarah
thanks for the comment. and i really like this. it was really good

2010-12-13 23:29:06raining smiles
Wow I this this is great(: I love how you used the wording(:

2011-12-19 08:54:25Simply-Me-20104
Wow! Some really powerful flow in here! Great story and a great poem!