An Extinguished Flame...., by Tyler Cedric Golden Subscribe to rss feed for Tyler Cedric Golden

Flames are always once strong, but then again, they are also
always put out.......

There was once a spark,
That I felt in my heart,
And through time it turned into a flame,
A flame that rose every time that one person said my name,
And it drove me so happily insane,
But then through time eventually my heart was drained,
Because hearts are broken and love is lost,
It is through feelings that we pay a cost,
When it comes to being vulnerable and lending some one our
hearts,
That we expect to be taken care of to finish from the
start,
But no instead something rattles your brain,
You loose all focus, hope, control, and love, everything,
all because of this extinguished flame.

(not finished)
Posted: 2009-05-22 16:32:10 UTC

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2009-05-30 15:05:12Natural_beauty_Ashe
this is vary good and interesting.i love the way you used such a metaphor for love and your heart.although its not finished its greatt.cant wait to read the rest.:)

2009-05-31 17:14:16dispersed_sky
nice way to say the feelings you bear so go onnn dear

2009-06-16 15:55:07~The Familiar Side of Strange~
this is very deep. lots of detail. though its not finished its truly amazing. good luck.