R.I.P. WITHIN MY HEART, by !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! Subscribe to rss feed for !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

AS LONG AS THE DOLPHINS DANCE IN THE SEA YOU SHALL BE IN MY
HEART SAFE WITH ME.
A FREE SPIRIT THAT COULD NEVER BE HELD DOWN &  
A LOVE SO GRAND THAT I COULD'NT HAVE FATHOMED 
EYES SO WARM THAT COULD MELT ANY COLD HEART &
HANDS SOFT AS THE AUTUMN BREEZE!SO EVAN THOUGH LIFE IS SO
FILED WITH SUCH HYPE & CRAZE. THE THOUGHT OF SEEING YOU ONCE
AGAIN HAS THE POWER TO GET ME THROUGH EVAN THE THICKEST OF
HAZE. FOR YOUR SMILE SO RADIANT NOT EVAN THE SUN COULD OUT
SHINE. SO REALLY ALL I CAN SAY IS THANK YOU FOR LOVING ME
SHARING YOUR TIME , & CHANGING WHO I TURNED OUT TO BE! 
 
R.I.P. ♥ KIM ♨
Posted: 2009-05-15 20:36:41 UTC

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2009-05-17 07:34:08Natural_beauty_Ashe
i really understand where you were coming from when you wrote this.it shows so much love and expression.amaziiiiing job.:)

2009-05-20 13:02:02Ashley Reneƫ *Raining Tears*
this is very well written, nice job

2009-05-23 01:53:31ma_chapa3xD
wow chuck! your AMAZING! you have great taste when you write poems! im more of a romantic lover of poems and this is so sweet! :D YOU'RE AWESOME! :) rachella

2009-05-23 13:42:24CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART
very beautifully written!!! I love it, its very sweet!! good job

2009-05-29 13:17:37dispersed_sky
you know how to manage the words to xpress the write feelings....

2009-05-30 04:57:59dispersed_sky
thank you so much for commenting on my poems i relly appreciated it and about your poem i think you have got a wonderful talent to xpress your feeling by these words and seriously few ppl can handle ans reset the words in their right phases...and tht kind of people i have seen on this web site good luck!!

2009-11-04 00:56:35connie
wow

2009-11-12 07:29:16//Stillsilent//
Wow indeed!!

2011-04-21 00:17:19Natural_beauty_Ashe
*tears*

2012-11-01 02:23:23Laura Glossop
Such a beautiful poem, very touching x