Nothing, by Candi Subscribe to rss feed for Candi

Why is "nothing" keeping you away?
What is "nothing" to make you say:
"I'll call you bacc," but never do
And when i call u, you cop an attitude
If "nothing" is keeping us apart
Then why-o-why is "nothing" breaking my heart?
I wish i knew what "nothing" was
So i could end it just because
The way i feel 4 for is true
But "nothing" is making me feels so blue
I wanted us to build a life
I even thought about being your wife
But now that "nothing" has appeared
I guess it will all just end here
The pain i feel is deep inside
The way to cure it is to be by your side
But you have "nothing" standing in our way
So i guess we'll just part our own ways
My love for you will always be there
If you ever decide "nothing" is no longer there
I'd do anything for you, all you need 2 do is ask
I'd've been your first and you'da been my last
But now all i can do is think and dream
About all our lovely memories
I'll miss you so much and long for your touch
But i guess you don't care
Or else "nothing" wuoldn't be there
But before i go, please answer this..
Is "nothing" me? Or some other bitch??

~Candi~
   2004
Posted: 2005-01-09 07:31:18 UTC

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2005-05-07 16:59:27wishing_on_stars
I like the way your words portrayed raw confusion, anger, and sadness. Great poem.

2005-12-06 16:21:17Crimson_Tide915
It was alright but at the end you made it to were it dident rhyme The whole poem rhymed until the end and it made me stop for a second and re read it but other than that... good poem

2007-10-29 02:51:35-fruit-loop-
splendid :)

2009-03-18 09:31:53Metamorphoser
did u find out what nothing was after jeeez 5 years now..i liked it.. but u should know better nothing oh wait im confused who says more nothing men or women LOL